The Era of the Second Element of the Literary Girl

As for Mo Shao Lao Zhai's plan to switch to writing light novels, it quickly sparked a discussion on the forum, but after all, the new book hasn't come out yet, and even the subject matter is not clear, so naturally there is not much to say.

mid-February.

After stealing Chen Yulan's bra while she was taking a shower and pretending to be Superman, she was discovered...

Li Xiaoci was beaten again.

Chen Yulan originally wanted to grab her stupid hair and say, "You are so old and pretend to be a superman, are you a primary school student?" But, after thinking twice, she decided to give up verbal preaching and let this guy use his body directly. Remember the lesson.

After all, if she asked like that, this guy would definitely say "I was a primary school student" shamelessly, without the self-esteem and integrity of an adult at all.

However, what Chen Yulan didn't know was that Li Xiaoci's purpose of stealing her bra was actually to smell the milk smell of flat-chested people, not to pretend to be a superman at all.

And it turns out...

Although you can smell the fragrance, it is definitely not milk fragrance!

Why do you think she can judge so accurately?

Because this smell is not at all the same as her mother's milk scent, yes, this is a judgment based on my own experience!

...

Grinning and rubbing his buttocks, Li Xiaoci also handed over the manuscript of the first volume of "Stones;Gate" to Chen Yulan.

The number of words in the first volume is not many, only about 80,000 words, which is equivalent to 30 or 40 chapters of online articles. Although it is unbelievable to publish so much content in a week, Chen Yulan and the readers have long been used to it. This speed is up. After all, Mo Shao's hand speed is well known in the light novel circle, and he can be called the fastest man in the industry.

Yes, the fastest refers to the code word speed, and Li Xiaoci never admits that there are other ambiguities in it.

then……

Chen Yulan also quickly finished reading the manuscript of the first volume, and then stared blankly at Li Xiaoci with a silly expression on her face.

She will definitely not admit that she has a low IQ and can't understand it, but, I have to say, after reading it, what she understands is limited to a few parts.

for example……

The male lead is too stupid to have a second-degree test. Don't you feel ashamed that he is a college student and still has a second-degree test like this?

Let's say...

The arrogance of the assistant is so cute!

Dudulu is so gentle and cute!

Sulfur Hanako is so cute too! It's a pity it's a man.

As for why the assistant came back to life even though he was dead, what world line theory, and the debate over the rationality of the time machine, to be honest, she didn't understand at all.

"You don't understand, do you? With your IQ, I guessed it a long time ago." On the other side, Li Xiaoci slumped on the sofa as if she had no bones, and pointed her toe at Chen Yulan, mockingly.

Although it is a legitimate young girl, this action itself is still very erotic. If there is any foot control or lolicon or something present, it is estimated that it will not be able to hold it.

Of course, Chen Yulan is definitely not a foot controler, and she is not interested in these white and tender feet at all. Therefore, she grabbed Li Xiaoci's ankle very simply, and lifted her upside down like a chicken.

"Still flirty?" Chen Yulan narrowed her eyes.

"sorry."

...

On February 19th, the much-anticipated transformation of Mo Shao, the first volume of "Steins;Gate" was finally released.

In a sense, "Stones;Gate" has attracted much more attention than any previous new book release. On the one hand, it is the end of "" and basically confirms the fact that Mo Shao is the most popular light novelist. On the other hand, the big boss in the field of love light novels suddenly ran to write science fiction light novels, which will definitely attract readers. curious.

For example, on Liu Along's side, after hearing about the release of "Stones;Gate", he even gave up today's fitness plan, and went to the bookstore early in the morning to queue up, and only then did he buy the physical body of "Stones;Gate" Book.

For a fat house like Liu Along, is the fitness plan important? Of course it is important! He wants to conquer his sister's heart,

Bear the brunt of the abs from one to eight!

Even giving up such an important task, one can imagine how important Mo Shao's new book is to him!

but……

After reading it, he found that the content of the first volume was not as attractive as expected.

How should I put it, the content of the entire first volume is full of a feeling of "some big news is about to happen but it hasn't happened for a long time". Although there are many strange details like some big foreshadowing, but, After reading the entire volume, there is not even a single explosive point in the plot!

In addition, Rintaro Okabe's secondary illness also made Liu Along, who had already left the secondary stage, feel very embarrassed. Back then, as a schoolmaster and fat man, he had passed secondary school, but he secretly wrote some messy Long Aotian novels, and ended up writing a few thousand words before giving up. And the male protagonist's second grade is a bit too much. If he commits a second grade in front of strangers, if the radio waves don't match, the shame will be overwhelming, okay?

In short, after reading the first volume, it feels like I don't understand the plot at all, but it seems so powerful!

In fact, when it comes to character creation, the character designs of those female characters are still good. After all, Mo Shao was the creator of cute elements such as "Tsundere" and "Natural Stupid". Naturally, these character settings are still remarkable. It's just that, if you want to talk about the plot, it doesn't feel as interesting as the love novels written by Mo Shao before. At least, Liu Along didn't have the feeling of wanting to read the next volume after reading the first volume. If there is any motivation to continue watching, it may be the assistant's arrogance, and the really reasonable Dudulu.

You said there are sulfur flowers?

roll! Even if he doesn't have a girlfriend and is single all his life, it's impossible for him to like the cute girl, okay?

There is also a physical education teacher surnamed Chen from Baita Primary School in Kyoto who has similar feelings to him.

In the past two days, Baita Primary School has just started, and he is still relatively leisurely, so he also took the time to read the first volume of "Stones;Gate".

After watching it, he felt that Mo Shao's transformation seemed a bit unsuccessful. Other people's plot flow, full of suspense, and various reversals, made people want to watch it. Why did it come to "Stones Gate"? Nothing to watch? Although there are a few unidentified foreshadowings, the lengthy and lack of ups and downs in the first volume of the plot is not good at all, isn't it too slow?

Is it because my posture is not rich enough to see the wonderful things inside?

...

Soon, on the night of the release, many posts related to Steins;Gate appeared on the forum.

"Let me just say it directly, Makise Kurisu is my wife, come to fight if you don't agree!"

"Then Dudulu is mine!"

"Heh! A bunch of trash! All real men choose Su Hanako!"

After all, the character design is still very pleasing, so after the release of the first volume, the character chefs of each party also emerged as the times require. However, in addition to the daily battles of character chefs, some people also posted: "By the way, I feel a little boring in the first volume."

"Yes, I dozed off a bit, especially the part where Okabe and his assistant were debating in the lecture, did I feel that my posture level was not enough at all? Yes, like a person who just passed subject two I was watching a group of old drivers racing, and I was stunned the whole time, just like taking a high-level math class, and then I fell asleep."

"There's also the male protagonist's secondary illness, and the labor-management embarrassment cancer is about to come out."

"I think the second disease is actually okay, if you can deal with the radio waves."

"Hey, hey, haven't you seen how many foreshadowings have been laid out in the first volume? I'm sure, this book in the later period will definitely be a godsend!"

"Brother, this is the first time I've written a science fiction light novel. Are you sure he won't collapse?"

"If it's a romantic light novel, I dare say that it will definitely win a batch, and it's a divine work. However, this old thief is a transformational work. To be honest, I really can't draw a conclusion too early."

There are many discussions on the forum, but most people are still looking forward to the follow-up performance of "Stones;Gate". After all, an excellent author should not be too bad on any subject, especially Mo Shao is the most popular light novelist in the industry. Even if he transforms, he should not disappoint. Although a small number of readers didn't have a good impression of the first volume, they didn't make any too arbitrary comments, and most of the discussions were more rational.

Actually...

For this phenomenon, as a young genius, Li Xiaoci himself had expected it long ago.

After all, Stone Gate is a slow-moving masterpiece. If there is no crazy foreshadowing of the first 12 episodes in the animation, how can there be ups and downs later? It’s like a person needs to eat four buns to be full, but it doesn’t mean that eating the fourth bun will make him full. What’s more, you need to masturbate before ejaculating. Who can ejaculate without masturbating? Therefore, no matter how boring and boring the early stage is, these preparations must be written and cannot be skipped.

Of course, she will definitely be a man who will become a god in the end, and this will never change!