Stay away from Conan

Chapter 739: Exciting thoughts

"Uh-huh...Mr. Akechi..."

After crying for a while, Yuanzi, who was lying on Xiaolan, looked at Gao Yuan with an aggrieved look. There were not many tears on his face, but he seemed to be disappointed by Gao Yuan's straightforward remarks. Feeling greatly shocked -

"At least...can you tell me where it's boring and let me use it as a reference?"

"Um……"

Looking at Yuanzi who was so persistent, it seemed that he was serious about his persistence in the script of this drama. Gao Yuan organized his language a little and roughly said:

"To put it simply, it is ordinary. An incident occurred at the beginning, the police arrived at the scene to investigate, and then found clues left at the scene and found evidence to name the murderer... Such a narrative is too ordinary for a short story... "

Saying this, Gao Yuan paused for a moment and said helplessly:

"Of course, the story is short and the plot is ordinary. This is not the main problem for mystery novels, because the fun of mystery novels lies in the final solution of the mystery. As long as the final solution is interesting and exciting enough, then this is an excellent novel. It’s a work. But as a drama…”

Speaking of this, Gao Yuan couldn't help but look at Xiao Ai beside him. He agreed with what Xiao Ai had just said and continued:

"What Xiao Ai just said is right. The beginning of the chapter is directly about the lengthy investigation and questioning plot. If it is performed like this, it will be too torture for the audience who usually do not watch similar works. This is not like a mystery novel. With a dedicated audience, charity dramas must ultimately be oriented to various groups who come to watch..."

"Uh, uh...that, that..."

Hearing what Gao Yuan said, Yuanzi's shoulders kept shaking, as if he mustered up the courage to refute, but when the words came to his lips, he didn't know what to say——

"So, instead of writing this kind of mystery script, I think it's better to write some stories that are suitable for all ages! Fairy tales, comedies, etc. are all good choices!"

Finally, Gao Yuan suggested this.

Regarding this suggestion, Xiao Ai and Conan both nodded silently, feeling that it was very reasonable.

"But...but..."

But Yuanzi still seemed not to give up, and said a little aggrievedly:

"I just want to write a script like this! It's like a fairy tale or something, that would be too ordinary!"

Somewhat unreasonably, Yuanzi, who was leaning on Xiaolan, sat up and complained coquettishly. Gao Yuan, Xiao Ai, Conan and others looked at them with helpless expressions——

"Yes, yes!"

However, Mitsuhiko supported Sonoko's statement:

"That kind of fairy tale that is not real at all is not interesting at all! Moreover, I think the script written by Sister Yuanzi is really quite real!"

"Right, right!"

When she heard that someone supported her idea, Yuanzi immediately became energetic. The sadness just now was suddenly thrown away from her mind, and she said seriously:

"I also feel that my script is very well written and has a real feeling! You know, when I was writing, my thoughts were flowing and I couldn't stop at all..."

As she spoke with emotion, Yuanzi still had some unfinished feelings about writing this script——

Then, Yuanzi felt helpless and complained:

"But...I couldn't write at all after that..."

In this regard, listening to Sonoko describing her experience, Conan kept a helpless smile on his face, and secretly complained in his heart——

"That's of course... Whether it's an encounter with a crime scene, or a police investigation or inquiry, it's all your personal experience, and it's normal for it to feel real when you write it down. But when it comes to solving incidents, that's true. It has nothing to do with you at all..."

"In short, no matter how difficult it is, I will write this script!"

To cheer herself up, Yuanzi said this with great force.

"so……"

In this regard, seeing that Yuanzi was still so motivated, Xiaolan also looked at Gao Yuan with a pleading look on her face and said:

"Mr. Akechi, why don't you think of a way to help Sonoko think of a script?"

Faced with this situation, Gao Yuan silently held his forehead, feeling helpless——

"The meaning of the death message and the evidence are easy to handle. After all, it is a script, and the clues can be modified as needed... But in the final analysis, the problem is how to write the script to make it interesting..."

Feeling embarrassed, Gao Yuan said this.

However, when Gao Yuan said this, Mitsuhiko couldn't help but said:

"Speaking of interesting things..."

"Let's think about it together!"

Ayumi also seemed to be very interested and said that she was a little eager to help Yuanzi think about the script and wanted to add her own ideas to Yuanzi's script.

"Hey! That's good!"

In this regard, when Xiaolan heard the two people say this, a gentle smile appeared on Xiaolan's face and said:

"Maybe you can come up with interesting stories more easily than us!"

Suddenly, facing the situation where Xiaolan seemed to be very optimistic about herself and others, Mitsuhiko, Ayumi, and Genta all looked very happy, while Xiaoai and Conan didn't say anything more, and just looked at it with a faint smile. With the attitude of the three of them being deeply interested in this matter——

Then, before Mitsuhiko and Ayumi, who made the first suggestion, could respond, Genta had already volunteered:

"I, I, I! I've already thought about it!"

"Huh? So fast!"

Xiaolan said slightly surprised.

"tell me the story!"

Yuanzi couldn't help but look forward to this and said anxiously.

So Genta told the story of how he thought the plot would develop.

The content of the story he told was continued from Sonoko's original script. When Kogoro Mouri gave an even more unreliable reasoning and made the scene fall into silence, the scene where the protagonist of the script, "Queen of Reasoning" Sonoko, should have appeared. , Genta, Ayumi, and Mitsuhiko, who became the boy detective team, appeared wearing windbreaker suits similar to Sherlock Holmes——

"You're too tender, uncle! If the eel in the eel rice is too tender, it won't taste good!"

With Ayumi and Mitsuhiko following him, Moto Kojima makes a gorgeous appearance.

This situation shocked Officer Memu and others present, and they couldn't help but ask:

"who is it!"

In response, with his hands behind his back, Motoda Kojima strode forward, showed a proud smile, and said loudly:

"The leader of the Young Detective Team, Motoya Kojima!"

With that said, Genta Kojima slowly walked into the scene and came to Officer Megure. He walked calmly and began to explain with great momentum:

"Mr. Oshita's finger is not pointing at anything, he is pointing to the number '1'!"

"The number '1'?"

Coincidentally, Takagi Wataru expressed doubts when faced with such remarks.

Therefore, Genta Kojima showed a proud smile on his face and said slowly:

"Yes! The murderer is Higashida Ichiro - you!"

——"Stop it!"

After listening to Yuan Taizheng's explanation, Yuanzi couldn't bear it anymore and interrupted:

"Who is 'Higashida Ichiro'! 'Higashida's' name is 'Naoya', right?"

"Just change it to 'Ichiro'!"

In this regard, because his story was interrupted, Yuantai said a little unconvinced, and pointed at Gao Yuan and said seriously:

"Just now, the detective brother also said that it can be 'modified'!"

For this reason, Gao Yuan, who was pointed at by Yuantai, could only smile helplessly. After all, he did say so.

But Yuanzi denied it very firmly:

"No way! And it's not fun at all!"

"That……"

At this time, seeing that Yuantai's suggestion was not adopted, Ayumi thought about it and put forward her idea.

And just like Genta, the plot envisioned by Ayumi also replaced the scene where Sonoko appeared in Sonoko's original script, and changed it to one in which Ayumi takes the lead, with Mitsuhiko and Genta following her -

"What Mr. Oshita wants to say is the English '1', which is 'one'! And when it comes to 'one', it sounds very similar to the dog's barking 'woof', so it actually refers to a dog!"

After appearing on the stage, Ayumi directly stated her reasoning.

But about this, both Officer Megure and Takagi Wataru were very confused:

"Ah? Do any of you have a dog?"

Looking at the four suspects at the scene, Officer Megure asked, but the result he got was negative.

So, Bumi continued:

"No, no! Because Mr. Higashida is actually a puppy! He is a puppy and the monster becomes..."

--"I have a headache……"

Seeing Ayumi telling such a story with a cute look on her face, Sonoko put her hands on her face helplessly and said speechlessly.

Seeing this, Ayumi couldn't help but feel a little disappointed when she looked at Yuanzi's dissatisfied look, and said in confusion:

"Huh? Isn't this interesting?"

In response to this, Gao Yuan, Conan, and Xiao Lan were all smiling awkwardly, not knowing what to say, while Xiao Ai smiled lightly and explained:

"It's not just adding wild imagination that can be called 'interesting'. If you can't give a reasonable explanation for the unexpected plot, it's no different from writing randomly."

"Ah, that's it..."

Bumi couldn't help but feel a little disappointed when she heard Xiao Ai's statement.

"Then it's better to do this!"

However, after listening to Xiao Ai's words, Guangyan also stopped by and put forward his idea.

Of course, the changes in the plot are still the same as the previous two, directly changing the protagonist Sonoko who was supposed to appear, and replacing him with Mitsuhiko as the leader, followed by Ayumi and Genta -

"Mr. Oshita extended his index finger, implying 'alien'!"

"'alien'?"

Hearing what Mitsuhiko said, Officer Megure and others couldn't help showing doubtful expressions.

But at the same time, after hearing the word "alien", Naoya Higashida, one of the four suspects at the scene, revealed his true identity as an alien in full view of the public - a man with the body of a child. Human-sized aliens, like the ones in the movie "ET."

In this regard, amidst everyone's surprise, Mitsuhiko continued to explain:

"Mr. Higashida is actually an alien who came here to make friends with people on Earth. But he was discovered by Mr. Oshita, so he temporarily stopped Mr. Oshita's heartbeat."

As he said that, Mr. Alien showed his original shape and came to the "corpse of the deceased". He used his super power on the "corpse", and Mr. Oshita came to life when he was supposed to be dead.

But in this regard, as a human policeman, Officer Megure decisively issued an order to arrest the aliens who appeared here.

Therefore, in order to show their friendliness to the aliens, with the help of Mitsuhiko and others, everyone in the Young Detective Team worked together to help the aliens escape many obstacles, and with the help of the aliens who recovered their abilities, they completely escaped Police chase...

——"STOP! STOP!"

Quickly stopping Mitsuhiko's narration, Sonoko couldn't bear it anymore and stood up from the bench and protested:

"How should we act like this! And what does 'like' mean... This is simply "ET"!"

"certainly……"

In response, Xiaolan smiled awkwardly and said encouragingly:

"The idea itself is quite interesting..."

"Reject! Reject them all! Are you going to ruin my script?"

But Yuanzi was so angry that she didn't care that she spoke loudly in front of the children, completely denying the ideas of the three young detective team.

"Huh? Why is this..."

In response, Mitsuhiko, Ayumi, and Genta couldn't help but show disappointed expressions, and then said with some dissatisfaction:

"Obviously you asked us to help think of interesting stories!"

"But it's not that outrageous!"

Sonoko couldn't help but said sharply, and looked at Ayumi and Mitsuhiko:

"Monsters...and aliens, what's the difference between this kind of story and fairy tales!"

"Huh? Isn't it very realistic to have respect for extraterrestrial life in the same universe as us!"

But to this, Mitsuhiko replied seriously:

"How do you know there are no aliens in this world! Besides, aren't you unable to write the rest of the story yourself?"

Hearing this, Sonoko blinked blankly. Facing Mitsuhiko who told the truth, he couldn't help but not knowing how to refute——

"In short, I will never accept this kind of plot no matter what!"

Yuanzi said insistently:

"And it's not fun at all!"

"Huh? This isn't interesting? Then what is interesting?"

Feeling at a loss, Genta asked in confusion.

“It doesn’t have to be a fantasy story to be interesting!”

At this time, Xiao Ai on the side explained:

"Even if it is something that happens every day in reality, it will be an interesting story if you look at it from a different perspective."

"Yes, yes!"

When Yuanzi heard what Xiao Ai said, he immediately agreed:

"I just want to write a more realistic mystery drama!"

"But there are many other themes for real stories, so why does it have to be a mystery?"

Conan asked confused.

"Because... I am the 'Queen of Reasoning'!"

Yuanzi seemed to be very serious and said:

"If you can't even write such a simple reasoning drama, it would be too embarrassing..."

"Oh...then I know..."

And when she heard that Yuanzi was actually expressing her feelings, Xiaolan couldn't help but smile and said:

"I remember that when you came back from Izu that day, you told Kyogoku that you were the 'Queen of Reasoning'... So Sonoko, when the charity play is performed, you want Kyogoku to come and watch it, right?"

"almost……"

Hearing this, Yuanzi blushed and lowered his head:

"After all, I have said everything out loud..."

In response to this, Gao Yuan, Xiao Ai and Conan, who also knew the inside story in Izu before, couldn't help but smile helplessly -

After working on it for a long time, what happened!

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