Save the Bachelor of Heaven

Xiang Nan then led Hao Shuwen, Xiao Suizi, Chen Can, and Zhu Ke to continue writing the script.

In fact, among the five, apart from Xiao Suizi, Xiang Nan's background is the worst.

He has no background at all, he was born in a poor village in Qilu, eight generations of his ancestors, none of them are capable, they are all ordinary people.

In comparison, Chen Can's father is the deputy commander of the military region; Hao Shuwen's father is the army commander, and her mother is the head nurse; Zhu Ke's parents also eat at the public house.

Although Xiao Suizi came from a bad family background and her father was sent to a labor camp, she was a well-known talented woman in the art troupe, able to write and draw.

Therefore, no matter who was in charge, it was originally Xiang Nan's turn.

But it happened to be him.

Firstly, Xiang Nan is now a pacesetter following Leifeng, naturally shrouded in a halo; secondly, Xiang Nan just wrote a good song, and the talent gradually became famous; Slave hand, art pressure as a pedestrian.

Among the five people present, except for Xiang Nan, none of them graduated from college. The highest education, that is, high school. It was still high school in the 1970s, and the knowledge I learned was probably equivalent to the level of junior high school now.

Therefore, Xiang Nan's education is the highest. In addition, he has been writing online articles, watching TV, watching movies, and reading novels all year round, so his experience and knowledge are much higher than the four of them.

As a result, what he said was meaningful and convincing, and he naturally dominated the entire project. It also subtly and silently made Hao Shuwen, Chen Can, and Zhu Ke, the proud high-ranking children, acquiesce in his leadership.

They didn't even notice it themselves.

...

They wrote until nine o'clock before going back to rest.

"Liu Feng, you are different from before." On the way, Chen Can suddenly said.

"Really, maybe you didn't know me before." Xiang Nan said with a slight smile.

Chen Can was taken aback for a moment, then smiled.

Indeed, before, he really didn't know Liu Feng, and he didn't even bother to know.

His father is the deputy commander of the military region, and he holds great power. He is a genuine son of a high-ranking cadre.

It's just that he has always been low-key, unassuming, and not causing trouble. Unlike Hao Shuwen, her father was just an army commander, so he raised his tail to the sky, which made people laugh.

But although he is low-key, it does not mean that he is not proud.

In his heart, he didn't look down on Liu Feng at all.

Liu Feng has no ability and no background, so he can only rely on doing good deeds and making contributions in exchange for praise, a certificate, and a title. And these are not rare for him at all.

But he didn't expect that Liu Feng, who he had been ignoring all this time, would actually make achievements now.

He also wrote songs and dramas, and became famous. During the creative process, Xiang Nan's talent, knowledge, and insight also impressed him.

He even suspected that Liu Feng had been pretending all along. Like himself, he is likely to be a child of a certain leader, a certain chief. In order to avoid attracting attention and being shocked, he has kept a low profile.

Thinking of this, Chen Can didn't dare to think about it anymore.

However, he secretly calculated in his heart that he could no longer underestimate Liu Feng in the future.

...

When Xiao Suizi and Hao Shuwen returned to the dormitory, Lin Dingding was still lying on the bed humming.

"Ding Ding, are you still angry?" Xiao Suizi asked concerned.

"Who is angry, I just have a stomachache." Lin Dingding concealed.

"Okay, don't be so stubborn, just get angry when you are angry." Hao Shuwen sat next to her and said, "I tell you, it's useless to be angry. You know, Liu Feng heard that you were mad at him, how did he respond? Is it?"

"How do you say that?" Lin Dingding asked curiously.

He Xiaoping, who was cleaning the house on the upper bunk, also quietly pricked up her ears.

"Liu Feng said, if you want to get angry with him, there's nothing he can do about it." Hao Shuwen laughed.

"Hey, is this still our Huo Leifeng?" Little Ballet said in surprise, "It's cruel enough, I don't feel sorry for our sister Lin at all."

"It's really unexpected that Liu Feng can say such a thing. Didn't he always hang around Tintin before and like to take care of her?" Dolma said in surprise.

When He Xiaoping heard what Liu Feng said, she felt a burst of joy in her heart.

"You don't know that. Who is Liu Feng now? He is a model of Lei Feng in the whole army, an excellent songwriter, and he is still writing dramas..." Hao Shuwen laughed, "He is famous all over the world, that is, In the blink of an eye, can I still look up to you?"

Everyone in the room was stunned when they heard what she said, and then they all nodded in unison.

For Liu Feng to write such a beautiful song, he will definitely become famous all over the world. At that time, as a big celebrity, he will really look down on an ordinary female soldier in the art troupe.

"Who cares to let him take a fancy to it." Lin Dingding sat up and said, "You are so annoying." After finishing speaking, she took the washbasin, pulled on her shoes, and went out.

"Haha, you're still stubborn." Hao Shuwen sneered.

"Speaking of which, Liu Feng is really extraordinary. He is talented and famous. He will be promoted sooner or later." Little Ballet said enviously, "If I knew today, I really regretted it..."

"What do you regret, do you regret not being friends with him?" Hao Shuwen teased without any scruples, making Little Ballet blush immediately.

...

In the next two days, Xiang Nan, Hao Shuwen, and Xiao Suizi continued to write scripts.

Two days later, the first version of the script was finally created and submitted to the political commissar for review.

"Okay, I gave you three days, and you really finished it." The political commissar said with satisfaction, and then he flipped through the script.

It can be seen that this script has a total of five acts, which are the five exemplary deeds selected by Xiang Nan and others. The content of the script is the reproduction of these deeds.

To be honest, Xiang Nan was very dissatisfied with the script.

Because the five-act drama is fragmented and lacks connection; and each act lacks dramatic conflict, which is somewhat straightforward; the characters in the play are relatively flat, and the good and bad guys can be seen at a glance, and there is almost no growth.

So this script, Xiang Nan thinks it is unqualified.

It's just that Xiao Suizi, Hao Shuwen, Chen Can, and Zhu Ke all thought it would be good to write it this way, and of course he couldn't be against everyone, and everything was left to the superiors to decide.

If they feel good, that's fine. Not good, take it back and change it.

...

The political commissar looked at it carefully, then frowned.

To be honest, this script cannot be said to be bad, and every story is quite touching.

For example, taking care of the widowed and lonely elderly for several years, not afraid of dirt, tiredness or hardship. He even took out his own allowance to treat the poor elderly; for example, regardless of the danger of his life, he single-handedly fought against armed gangsters. Although he was seriously injured, he kept the country's property.

These deeds are very good, and they are all worth learning from, but he also feels that there is something lacking in them.

"Political commissar, is this script not good?" Seeing him frowning, Hao Shuwen asked quickly.

"It's good, it's just that there are some shortcomings." The political commissar thought about it.

"What's the shortcoming?" Everyone asked curiously.