Hogwarts: Becoming a god from reselling fresh food

Volume 4 Summary u0026 Taking a Day Off

Summary of Volume 4 \u0026 Taking a Day Off

This volume is a bit long...

Basically the amount of the previous two volumes.

I started two long-term plots, and I spent a lot of time laying the groundwork for them, whether it was chip manufacturing in Muggle society or the protagonist's own strength growth.

Zooming in and out of the cursed chip, developing potion and photoresist...the principles of Animagus transformation, and the final multiple Magus transformation...basically all the elements of the climax have been explained before.

Even the seed principle of the soul, "total recall", "white fresh hormone", etc. have all been explained before.

So when some readers say that the chapters about the transformation of multiple Magus are abrupt or unscientific, I don’t agree with it... I wrote so much foreshadowing and asked the protagonist to do so much research just to make him come. Such a moment!

Magic, if you want to write it convincingly, you must accumulate its credibility bit by bit, so...the previous principles are only so many and so detailed.

And this also results in the climax being moved to the last twenty chapters, and the front part is indeed a bit dull.

This is due to my inexperience and will be improved in the next volume.

But if you call me stupid, I don’t quite recognize it... Most of the Harry fanfics follow the plot, and there are copies of the original text. I even briefly mentioned Sirius’s trial, just to prevent everyone from reading those things that have been repeated a lot. Second things.

However, maybe the book friend means that I am slower...

I agree...

I have a disabled hand, and more importantly, a disabled brain. Thinking about the plot makes my head spin, and it makes me even more unhappy...

Take this volume as an example. In order to make the plot more coherent, the outline was adjusted four or five times. Each time, it was delayed for half a day and a day, causing the manuscript to keep shrinking.

And in order to perfect the plot of the next volume, they directly wiped out the manuscripts I had saved.

As a newbie, I can't use my hands and brain at the same time. I am very troubled by my limited strength.

Up to now, I have not saved a single chapter.

And I'm the type who gets super panicked if I don't have a manuscript on hand, so I take some days off and prepare a detailed outline for the next volume so that I can write smoothly.

I also hope that all readers will understand.

Let’s get back to the story.

In the next volume, it’s 91 years and it’s time for the protagonist to go back to school.

I have been burying this thread from the beginning of this volume, including the reverie when I was talking to Patrick at the beginning, the time-stuck in the middle, and making a big jump for the protagonist in the external environment and his own strength. In fact, it is all for the sake of returning to the world. The school made preliminary preparations.

The title of the book contains "Hogwarts", so of course I have to ask him to go back.

But, I don’t know how to follow the plot.

There will be a bit of the original plot, but probably not much left. If you think about Sirius, the diary, and the protagonist's style, it's impossible to follow the plot honestly.

Therefore, the next volume will still be a furious one.

However, there will be everything everyone wants to see.

Even though the protagonist is so rebellious, in fact, those things that warmed our childhood are the core supporting this book, which is just a reverse expression.

Moreover, I will try to learn from the lessons of the previous volume and make the rhythm better.

Anyway, stay tuned.

Finally, thank you for the reward of Quick Kill Children's Shoes, and thank you for the reward of no puppet control in Moon Path, 666. And all of you who have been voting and commenting. I love you all! kisses!

Monthly ticket, monthly ticket, when can you get a thousand?

Equally determined, evenly determined, when will it rise again?

Huo Yuanjia, Huo Yuanjia, you were number one in Tianjin!

kowtow!

bow!

Thanks,

Exit~

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