One hundred and ten thousand words, many foreshadowings that can only be revealed at a later stage are arranged, and a story line that is enough to run through is laid down.

Because Mondstadt is the starting point of travel, or it may become the end of travel in the future, I placed all my foreshadowings in this place.

From the author's point of view, this volume was written in a hurry, and there are many areas that are unsatisfactory, such as the place where the pen was hidden at the beginning, such as the names of parents and so on.

Of course, I have only been in the industry for less than half a year, and I have probably only written about 1 million words (I was told by the backend that I have written 700,000 words. In fact, I also have a Yelan fanfic with more than 200,000 words at an external site)

The image of Mo Yu in my mind... To borrow a quote from a book friend, he should be the kind of person who helps each other internally, but is decisive and tyrannical externally, because in the Vanity Fair, if you are not tyrannical, you will be the one being bullied (reference Mondstadt and Solstice).

Another one is about Moyu’s positioning. I spoke in a very respectful tone at the beginning entirely because of the family education I received and some of my... personal thoughts.

I mainly wanted to use changes in pronouns to represent Moyu's emotions. For example, at the beginning, when he just came back from public relations outside, he was not very accustomed to the environment at home, which is commonly known as "the position is not right", and then because My mother's words completely broke my guard, and I realized that I was at home now, not outside where ghosts and monsters roamed around. In the end, Bai Wen came to deliver a letter. That was just a foreshadowing, an introduction to the Liyue chapter.

As for the title "Mother", in my opinion, it is completely used to convey words, at least to exaggerate my feeling of being upright and resolute, so I used three personal pronouns. Replacement rather than no uniform changes.

Of course, it may be that there is a problem with my writing and I didn’t handle this part well. In fact, now that I think about it, it might be much better to write a little more about psychological activities.

As for the title of Lord Ningguang, Moyu was able to reach the position of Shaking Light Star because of Ningguang. In private, he could call him by his first name, or call him Mr. Ningguang, or teacher, but in public , whether it is Ke Qing of the Hai Lantern Festival talking to Ning Guang in public, or choosing to reflect history, even officials of the same rank must show respect to each other and call others "sir."

So I think title wise... there's really nothing to pick here.

Speaking of Mo Yu's reaction to Ning Guang, the one that I find most objectionable is the sentence "What do you tell me to do?"

I didn't think much about it when I wrote this sentence. I admit that it may lead to a lot of misunderstandings, but it actually makes sense.

Politically speaking, Mo Yu is a student of Ning Guang. If Mo Yu is sent by Ning Guang to do anything, it is because Ning Guang does it as a teacher, not as a Tianquan star. Do.

Thinking about it from another angle, for the other Seven Stars, they don't know whether Mo Yu was sent out by Ning Guang this time, whether Mo Yu himself went to work non-stop because of the foreign trade contract that was about to expire, or because of Ning Guang ordered him to do something, but they didn't know this.

Because there are only a few people who know that Mo Yu is going to Mondstadt because of Ning Guang's arrangement. These people are either Mo Yu's relatives or Ning Guang's right-hand men. Even if they know, Ning Guang can still use "Let "Ye Lan will be the examiner to see if Mo Yu is qualified enough to become a teacher" to explain.

If you say at this time, "Why did you write so much? Aren't you just talking nonsense?", what I want to say is that I was almost unbearable under some pressure, so I put these things that were originally supposed to be in the glass. The main plot of the month is over, and the content of taking over the role of Dragon King Rudo after Osel's death has been written in advance. This is all the foreshadowing I laid in the Mondstadt chapter.

Of course, in my opinion, they are convinced of Ningguang. When the server was first launched, Ningguang’s character painting had a comment from Kaiyangxing. Ningguang is the biggest secret in the entire Liyue Port. This can also be said. To a certain extent, it represents the attitude of some Qixing towards Ningguang.

Although Ke Qing did not deal with Ning Guang, she would still follow the senior's instructions to do civil construction work, and would also go to Qunyu Pavilion to quarrel with Ning Guang and exchange opinions.

Even the other seven stars turned a blind eye to Ningguang's connivance with Beidou. That was the Death Star, and it was an armed pirate team. They may be the armed force that Ningguang secretly cultivated, and Yelan was also the person Ningguang trusted the most. Even the two lists of threats to Liyue in the General Affairs Department were made by Ye Lan alone.

A person who has an absolute advantage in intelligence, but also gets involved in disputes and business wars between some people from time to time, who dares to say that there is no shadow of Ningguang behind this?

His subordinates took the place of Ning Guang to get involved in business wars and disputes, and another group of people had powerful armed forces. Together, these things, according to "Ning Guang sent Mo Yu to Qixing, so it means that he will send other Qixing to become Qixing's boss." , making them unhappy will make Liyue unstable.” With this logic, could it be that the other Seven Stars had already started causing trouble?

There are powerful weapons, a top-notch intelligence network, and there is even a high possibility that Ningguang will be involved in various things in Liyue Port. At this time, the other seven stars will not resist? Because it is entirely possible for Ningguang to kick them all down one by one.

what is the reason? Because Ningguang is a Tianquan star who has been personally named by the Emperor Xian Dianyi. Even if they are given ten thousand courages, they cannot overthrow Ningguang. This is how Ningguang tolerates Beidou, and this is how Ningguang can support Moyu to the top. Confidence!

Finally, there is only one update today. I didn’t sleep all night last night. I woke up this morning and went crazy. Then I deleted the first thing. Now I really want to rest.

I once wanted to finish writing the first month of this book and then run away, but I feel that I have not seriously written a complete story after half a year in the industry. I want the two books I have now The book ends normally.

Oh, by the way, if you think I have worded something inappropriately or used the wrong idiom, remember to @me in the background, because I will not read comments from today on. As for inappropriate wording and the like, @I will Delete after correction.

Unknowingly, I wrote more than two thousand words, and finally I sighed.

I really want to write this story in a way... similar to the feeling that every chapter is not just a novel, and every word is useful, whether it is an emotional line or a plot line.

But now it seems that this idea is too picky among readers. Maybe Dianniang or Hedgehog will respond better. Tomato readers like short, fast and refreshing articles, but this kind of fandom with a lot of foreshadowing is still not good.

Maybe I should stick to my original idea and write a rule book?

That’s all, let’s just write it here.

2024/2/26 Feng Jiuxiao

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